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Indie writer seeks audience with an audience. Paying customers welcome. [pronouns: ze/hir] Daily free stories happen because it is an excellent counter to Writers' Block.

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laughing-coffins: {I was thinking about writing earlier today. Oh gosh, I love to write. It consumes my thoughts much more often than it...

laughing-coffins:

{I was thinking about writing earlier today.  Oh gosh, I love to write.  It consumes my thoughts much more often than it should.  But then I started thinking… What exactly makes some writings good, others great, and some just plain bad?  Of course, this is highly, HIGHLY subjective, but I thought I would share my thoughts anyway, because this is as much my writing-practice blog as it is my roleplay blog (the two just happen to overlap a lot).  But, without further ado~

In my humble opinion, quality writing has these attributes:

  1. Clarity- people know what you are talking about without having to stop and decode your text.  A picture should appear naturally in your reader’s mind- they’re waving their own paintbrush across an outline you create.  A challenge is one thing (don’t treat your audience like they’re stupid), but it should not be a struggle for the reader to construct your scene in their mind.
  2. Flow- The text doesn’t feel stilted, rough, or patchy.  You almost shouldn’t know you’re reading, it should feel utterly natural.  Like thoughts.
  3. Poetry and Thoughtfulness-Art, vividness, rich and descriptive language.  Turns of phrase that make people stop and think.  Attention to minutia.  Judicious and meaningful use of symbolism, allusions, etc., that compliments, (not distracts from) the rest of your piece.  The challenge here, however, comes in avoiding the deadly trap of pretentiousness. 
  4. Cohesive, Coherent Vision- Everything- every word, every pause, every punctuation mark- has a purpose and contributes somehow to the clarity, feel, characterization, or plot.  Every last little shard is a tile in your mosaic.
  5. Effect- Your words should leave something imprinted in your reader’s heart, or mind, or spirit, or anything.  To make them feel, think, glimpse inside a new paradigm.  To leave a piece of yourself inside someone else (even at a subconscious level).  Be resolute, individual, and unyielding in your creativity.  Do not bend to society’s whims.
    If your writing leaves no effect, was there a point to it at all? 

I hope this has been useful (or at the very least, interesting) to my fellow writers.  Again, these are just my thoughts, and I firmly believe any and all ‘advice’ is to be taken with a grain of salt.  Have a lovely night, everyone! ❤}

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ATTENTION SPG FANMILY

iamlintheawesome:

So most of us (if not all) already know about the ten thousand conspiracy theories the fandom has been coming up with lately. I for one would like to see more of other people’s contributions to the theories without scrolling through pages and pages of the “#vice quadrant” tag. So what I propose is that we use the tag “#spg illuminati confirmed” for our conspiracy theories. I have to credit singing-circuitry for the idea, since they came up with it

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02. On a Crescendo

officialsteampoweredgiraffe:

Track List Reveal for Steam Powered Giraffe: The Vice Quadrant: A Space Opera

Track #2 - On a Crescendo
Written by David Michael Bennett

“Before long 
They will build a city along 
all the sky and anchor it tight 
to this rock so we can sail right out of here”

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bathsabbath: culturallyrelevanturl: susiephone: astra-lux: Not enough people talk about the fact that Leonardo da Vinci was gay. Like,...

bathsabbath:

culturallyrelevanturl:

susiephone:

astra-lux:

Not enough people talk about the fact that Leonardo da Vinci was gay. Like, he’s literally the father of modern technology and one of the smartest human beings to ever live and I never ever learned in school that he was gay. 

If all the LGBT people are as “DOOMED” as the bible thumpers think we are, hell, at least we’re in good company. 

I was about to say I can’t believe I didn’t

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attndotcom: Here's What Happened When An Alabama Cop Threatened to Murder a Black ManIn May of 2013, Alexander City, Alabama police officer...

attndotcom:

Here’s What Happened When An Alabama Cop Threatened to Murder a Black Man

In May of 2013, Alexander City, Alabama police officer Troy Middlebrooks was secretly recorded proposing the murder of a black resident, saying that he could hide evidence in order to make the proposed killing look like it was in self-defense, according to a report published by the Guardian Tuesday morning.

But after Vincent Bias, the man Middlebrooks proposes killing in the recording, played the tape to the

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singing-circuitry: David Bennett now needs to/deserves to sleep for the next week or so IMO Seconded

singing-circuitry:

David Bennett now needs to/deserves to sleep for the next week or so IMO

Seconded

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Police Officer Allegedly Shackled Elementary School Students With ADHD

Police Officer Allegedly Shackled Elementary School Students With ADHD

think-progress:

A federal lawsuit out of Kentucky has placed law enforcement in the
spotlight once again, raising concerns about overzealous disciplinary
policies carried out against special-needs students when they commit
minor infractions.

That is a hellishly uncomfortable position to be in - even if you’re hyper-mobile. This is fucking abuse.

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Challenge #00922-B191: Smoke Gets in Your Eyes

http://thentheresthisspazz.tumblr.com/post/123284811011/mythological-creature-aus

Keep going!

[AN: OK for future reference and my current incompetence, I’m using a checklist.

[ ] (In/Suc)cubus
[X] Siren
[X] Werewolf
[ ] Cursed animal
[X] Dragon
[X] Frog
[ ] Vampire

thank you for your patience with me. Oh, and haimaee? Here’s more]

He always came with the smell of smoke. Sharp and acrid. “Good morning, Princess.”

Emily automatically began making is Grande Soy Latte with a shot of chilli and three shots of caramel.

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liberiproject: I'm really looking forward to that album!

liberiproject:

I’m really looking forward to that album!

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thoughts on the friendzone

wendycorduroy:

when i was 5 years old my best friend was a boy named kyle who didn’t know how to knock on doors so he made dinosaur noises outside my window to wake me up in the summer until i demonstrated how to ball his fists and slam them against my doors.  we collected caterpillars in my trailer park and built them houses while we traded pokemon cards.  he wasn’t the only one.  there was ben, and mitch, and noah—

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raptinamber: Hey! steampoweredgiraffe made their way into a Watch Mojo top 10 video! Yay! They're not *in* the top 10, but they get an...

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01. The Vice Does Tight

officialsteampoweredgiraffe:

Track List Reveal for Steam Powered Giraffe: The Vice Quadrant: A Space Opera

Track #1 - The Vice Does Tight
Written by Isabella Bunny Bennett

“We hoped that there was life out there
But we could never know. The horror of the stars above could crush us with one blow.”

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A 6-word tragedy

I wake, and you’re not here.

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